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©2003-2009 ~crimsonskyez
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An attempt to draw Aura, the little girl from .hack//SIGN, all grown up. I was going to finish it, but I guess I kinda wanted input first. ^^ Anything I should change about the picture? I like the way her eyes came out, even though I kinda gotta work on her hair again... I can't figure out what to do with her hand... and her feet are going to stay like that.. because they're supposed to look ghostly. :) I'd also like advice on what I should color this with.. most likely it'll be colored pencils.

My first attempt at some actual fanart, without using just one pic for a guide, and instead using several, using them to make my own pose. Does it look like her at least? :O

Aura (C) Project Hack.

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:icondamara:
About the best suggestion I have is make some of the lines curvier... the hair in a couple of places has some really stiff lines. Other than that, tinker with it until /you're/ satisfied with it. In my experience, the artist is the hardest one to please. o_-

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Alright.. guess I'll do that when I get a chance. Thanks for the feedback, hun. ^^ :hug:

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I checked out your work, come check mine! All comments appreciated!

:iconfallendeity:
shes looking really good ^^

the lines are a bit choppy and stiff but you can fix it and make it all better ^^

why dont you make her legs a little longer?? shes supposed to be older, right?

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Italian mothers never threw a baseball in their life, but can nail you in the head with a shoe thrown from the kitchen, while you're in the living room ><
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I'll try to work on the lines. It was just a sketch, after all. ^^ And if I make the legs longer, they're gonna be cut off by the page. o_o

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I checked out your work, come check mine! All comments appreciated!

:iconfallendeity:
heehee i understand ^^ I cant wait to see the finished version up ^^

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Italian mothers never threw a baseball in their life, but can nail you in the head with a shoe thrown from the kitchen, while you're in the living room ><

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